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Post  megagamefreak1 on Wed Nov 05, 2008 3:03 pm

Anyone who writes fiction in their spare time, post here!!!

Current story: (in the drafting process, but open for anyone who wants to read it) Ethia Chronicles (14+); This story features most characters in KHO, and takes place 17 years after the war against the Third Warrior.


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Post  Mavander on Wed Nov 05, 2008 3:04 pm

I write if I want to, but not in English, so don't expect it here. Though I always have plenty of ideas, and can help with perfecting a story.
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Wed Nov 05, 2008 3:06 pm

Japanese? Very nice. I'm not very good at Japanese.
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Post  Mavander on Wed Nov 05, 2008 3:09 pm

That's my signature. Also, it's just rewritten from here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P0k1ITVJZM0

From hearing of course, because everyone gets something wrong. Heck, I bet mine is wrong somewhere too.
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Post  Toshimi-chan on Wed Nov 05, 2008 3:48 pm

I may post links to something of mine up here later....
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Post  zmanwarrior on Wed Nov 05, 2008 4:42 pm

I'm in the planning stage of a story about a boy who suddelny wakes up as a wolf spirit (not a kitsune, or fox spirit. Those are WAAAAAAAY overused.)
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Post  Mr Aids on Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:57 pm

Ethia Chronicles is fucking awesome.

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Post  megagamefreak1 on Thu Nov 06, 2008 4:36 pm

Do you masturbate to it daily?
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the Ethia Chronicles?

Post  Rakshata on Thu Nov 06, 2008 8:25 pm

It seems as though the ethia chronicles has already been posted to the web, you mind linking me to it?
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Thu Nov 06, 2008 9:42 pm

I'm afraid for now you'll have to e-mail me if you want Ethia Chronicles. I do not have it actually uploaded to the web, and I can't attach a MS Word file to these posts. I'll try to upload it to a file share tomorrow then link to it here.
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Post  Mr Aids on Thu Nov 06, 2008 10:28 pm

@MGF: Yes.

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Post  Toshimi-chan on Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:28 am

Yay! I'll finally get to read Ethia Chronicles!!! Very Happy
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:52 pm

Nov. 7th, 2008
Ethia Chronicles.doc
Hopefully it works.
Enjoy, and masturbate to its glory (I'm going to stop that now before DGF strips me of my mod status)
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Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 7:08 am

Ewww, .doc
I'll download and then comment.
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Post  Animetal on Sat Nov 08, 2008 7:12 am

DOUBLE POST MADNESS!
I just Ctrl+F'd "Ani" and found that I was Indeed mentioned ONCE in 76 pages. This made me rage a little. And the attack was lead by Domo, but if you wanna take pressure of him and unto me, feel free to.
But hey, I was mentioned!
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:31 am

Cool... I'll edit that and say it was lead by Domo.

Did anyone else download it?
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Post  Mavander on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:11 pm

I CTRL+F-ed for 'Mav' and haven't found it even once. So I'm not reading it.
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Post  Toshimi-chan on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:25 pm

Yeah I CTRL+F'd for me and found nothing sooooo...... not reading it Very Happy
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:48 pm

You egotistical bastards.
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Post  zmanwarrior on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:55 pm

Lol. I control-F'd myself and found nothing. Iim still going to read it though.
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Post  Rakshata on Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:28 pm

I read most of it until I lost track of what was going on in it, then I control F for myself and went to the part where my character actually got some action. Good story, but extreme descriptions make it a bit of a bore. good other wise.
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:51 pm

Extreme descriptions? Huh?

Yeah, I'm kinda pulling a Stanley Kubrick in this one.

Get used to me using tht phrase a lot. What it means is it's primarily meant to challenge readers, and no, not on how well they can understand it. It's hard to follow, yes, but it's somewhat intended to be that way. I still try to throw in some parts to try to make it all enjoyable at the same time.

Don't know who Stanley Kubrick is? Watch 2001: Space Odyssey, noob.
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Post  shade-of-black on Mon Nov 17, 2008 1:16 am

MGF, your style is really basic.

You kinda just tell us what happened with very few narrative flourishes.

so instead of something like :

" James strode across the room in such a way that any sane person moved out of the way, in fear of being caught in his wrath. His eyes were black pits of fury, windows into a dark and violent soul. "

you write something like :

" James walked across the room. He looked angry. "

Just take a little time when you write to fully flesh out the scene, it's alot less confusing and more enjoyable to read.

I like the story though, it's a nice setting but you could go a little deeper into your charecters and be a bit more narrative.
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Post  Mr Aids on Mon Nov 17, 2008 2:21 am

That...was...awesome.

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Post  Mavander on Mon Nov 17, 2008 7:05 am

Aids, I'm sorry to tell you this, but you act like a fanboy. A very annoying one.

"(...)windows into a dark and violent soul."
That just sounds emo. I'd write something about eyes being able to crack bones if that was possible. But well, it's your style. And, you're right, if his style is really like that, it's to simple.
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