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Post  Mr Aids on Tue Nov 18, 2008 12:33 am

OMG MAV YOU SO COOL HAVE MAH BABIES

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Post  Mavander on Tue Nov 18, 2008 7:45 am

Turn around and go forward, until you die of thirst.
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Post  Mr Aids on Wed Nov 19, 2008 12:12 am

How could I die of thirst.

*another bottle of rum appears out of thin air*

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Post  megagamefreak1 on Thu Nov 27, 2008 11:29 pm

Shade.

This is no longer contstructive criticism, boss. This is BASHING.

I clearly said it was still a draft. I'll go back and fine tune it AFTER the first draft is complete, just as I do all of my work. A simple style is standard for a first draft. I'm getting my ideas on paper. Not chiseling it in Marble to be put on display in a world-class museum.

I give you this request once more.

Back...
The fuck...
Off...

And happy Thanksgiving.

Oh, and thanks for what you said about the storyline. I appreciate it.
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Thu Nov 27, 2008 11:41 pm

http://www.filedropper.com/ethiachronicles

Hope it works.

Not much more in this one I don't think. Typed up to halfway(about) into chapter 19.
Before you bash it, remember: IT'S A FREAKING FIRST DRAFT!

KHO Chars introduced thus far:
Zaaku
Ukazu
Lyra
Velexia
Tsumugari (in KHO, Dylan or JpnClassHero)
EJ
The Reaper
Ani
Mr. Aids
Wolfan
Rayun & co.
Ryashaa
Rakshata
Scratch
Alberio/Domo
Z(Zmanwarrior)

Anyone else who wasn't introduced yet may not appear until book 2, though I'm trying to make it so everyone has an appearence in book one, even if they don't have any importance until book 2.
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Post  Toshimi-chan on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:23 pm

Mr Aids wrote:How could I die of thirst.

*another bottle of rum appears out of thin air*

...I think he's got you there Mav
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Post  zmanwarrior on Sun Nov 30, 2008 9:45 pm

The site's not letting me download it.
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Mon Dec 01, 2008 5:17 pm

I'll try again tomorrow, just hang tight.
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Post  Mavander on Wed Dec 03, 2008 12:21 am

Toshimi-chan wrote:
Mr Aids wrote:How could I die of thirst.

*another bottle of rum appears out of thin air*

...I think he's got you there Mav

You think that what was the reason I didn't answer?
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Post  Mr Aids on Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:09 am

Yes.

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Post  Animetal on Fri Dec 05, 2008 11:49 am

No can download, compaƱero.
Get a new link.
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Post  zmanwarrior on Fri Dec 05, 2008 7:46 pm

Yeah. Tomorrow has come and gone.

I mean the tomorrow of a few days ago

.....wait.... what?
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Post  Mavander on Fri Dec 05, 2008 11:29 pm

Aids, get him some rum, he needs to think straight.
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Post  Mr Aids on Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:26 am

*shoves a bottle of rum down Z's throat*

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Post  Animetal on Sat Dec 06, 2008 8:04 am

Kinky
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Mon Dec 08, 2008 11:16 pm

Fuck, sorry guys, I'm just really stressed out lately with finals and memories of a year ago still haunting me, AND I lost my flash drive, so now I can't post EC until I get a new flash drive... or find my old one.

God, this is, like, the seventh time I've lost it!

Also, remember it's still a first draft, so there's a few things I changed since the last update. For example, I changed Minori's last name from Hoshino to Hoshizora. Yes, the beloved Old World human is now Neikon "Minori" Hoshizora.

If I could just find someone with some good skill in Flash, I could imagine this making a decent animated series...
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Sat Dec 13, 2008 11:52 pm

So am I the only one actually posting my work?

Ethia Chronicles.doc
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Post  Mavander on Sun Dec 14, 2008 1:27 am

Yes, you are.

Also, I'm mentioned. I'll read it now.
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Post  Mavander on Sun Dec 14, 2008 6:47 am

Double post.

1. Memento. MEmento mori.

2. I'm very, very dissapointed that you didn't include me in the "Of Bards and Summoners". I mean COME ON.

3. Why didn't you want to invite Ani? He's such fun to talk to. Oh, well, he's there anyway, so...

4. If I am to be in the story, pm me and I'll give you more or less the description of my character. If I am to be in the story, but you want to write my character yourself, fine. Just remember one thing. I. Stab. Paladins. In. The. Face. No exceptions. No mercy. While singing an innocent lullaby.

5. It's been so long I got dehydrated while reading it.
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:09 am

Sorry, I know next to no Latin =P I honestly guessed that based off whatever knowlege I have of latin roots. I suppose other than that one spelling error I have it correct?

Then again, who DOES know a good amount of Latin? Well, other than magi of course... And Mav...

Ah yes, I forgot you were a first class bard. And Domo's a summoner, isn't he (first or second class)? But for one, that chapter's not complete. For two, I meant to go back and change that title anyway. It just slipped my mind.

Keep in mind though that Zaaku and Ethos are beyond first class paladins. If you try to stab Ethos, he'll slap you in the face with his bible. Not Zaaku though. He'll just freeze your insides. And yes, he can do that.

Zaaku=1st class paladin, 2nd class mage.

Go ahead and PM me the description. I want to capture everyone's characters accurately.

Poor Ryashaa, no one waited for her to catch up!

And anyone who's confused about this first/second/third class shit, it refers to experience, skill, and power level, so first clas swould be OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAND, Second class would be your average class, and third class is someone still in training.
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Post  Mavander on Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:23 am

I don't know a good amount of latin. But my polish classes cover up soemtimes even biology, so I know about memento mori and morte dance at least.

Keep in mind that I AM practically a god (you'll see it in description more accurately) and I absolutely HATE HATE HATE paladins.

Writing the pm now.
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:41 am

Keep in mind, though: In the new world, no one is god. There are the divine ones, but no one is god.
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Post  Mavander on Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:45 am

Also, keep in mind that I am not from this world. My backstory would make your insides commit seppuku from suffering. Probably because it may possible maybe be a lot cliche.

Sent the pm.
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Sun Dec 14, 2008 10:01 am

Okay, awesome.

Ok, what's your alignment though? Four forces make up the alliance: The Mimizuku Rebels and the Hogosha, who are essentially the good guys, and the Akumu (Rayun's army, akumu=nightmare) and the Kyofu clan, who are evil, but both share the interest of ridding Ethia of the Mimizuku clan.

The Mimizuku rebels... the title says it all. They're mainly Mimizuku demons opposing their own, but there have been human, felasi, and even elven recruits before.

The Hogosha (Hogosha meaning "Guardians") are essentially an elite police/military force set on keeping order in Ethia.

The Akumu are Rayun's army. 'Nuff said.

The Kyofu are a clan mainly composed of demons. They're an evil clan allied with the Akumu (to the point where the Kyofu are considered a faction of Akumu).
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Post  Mavander on Sun Dec 14, 2008 10:10 am

That's simple. I don't have one. I come and go, aiding any side I see fit. Granted, the other side will get massacred, so let's just say I'll be mostly on your side, since you seem to have fewer numbers.
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