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Post  degreenfreak on Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:04 pm

BELOW IS THE ORIGINAL POST. THIS PART IS JUST HERE TO SHOW YOU THE MOST UP TO DATE THINGS

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Vitral Galaxies' title was in fact misspelled. not a good start.

Vitral Galaxies never started because it wasn't organized or set out properly. definitely not a good start.

Vitral Galaxies was meant to be a multi-author comic. and after me realizing how KH:O come to it's end, it's obvious it was just going to fail just as bad.


HOWEVER...

this new version of "vitral galaxies" is way more organized and I am indeed trying to do something for it that I haven't ever done before for any comic I've ever done (EDIT: I mean made) or contributed to...

WRITING A SCRIPT

it is definitely not going to be a multi author comic, but I will however be accepting cameos, but you must have a story line behind how you got there.

it will also hopefully help change sprite comics to be more original and better in general.

things I'm planing to do with it are:
-each galaxy will most of the time be based on a video game series (mario, sonic, ect.), but some will be original.
-the storyline will be original, and hopefully will interest people enough to read the entire thing.
-make it one of the best looking sprite comics on the web. for example if the colours of a character doesn't fit with the current theme, I will recolour it so it doe's (a dark looking char in a bright area looks stupid). If I don't like the way the sprites look, I will attempt to change them to make it look better (more shading, more detail, whatever I need to do).
-I will include drawings for somethings and will try my best to not make it look out of place.
-to finish it, and to only make comics for it when I can and what to. and I REALLY want to make comics for it, so you can expect it to update a decent amount
-and to, of course, make some of the most intense and face paced battles like I have done in the past

now proof I have made a script (this is the first update for it so far)

Spoiler:
degreenfreak presents:

Heroes of the Virtual Universe/
Galaxy Heroes/ Virtual Galaxies

What is it?
It is a attempt to revolutionize sprite comics in general by trying to be original, including a strong story, real drawings (by me) and intense action like seen in blood cage and sonic rush explosion (both discontinued comics).

It is the real Vitral (I can’t believe I mis-spelled it and left it like that) Galaxies.

it is a attempt of making a sprite comic that interests even people who are sick of them.

It is a attempt to show an example on how multi-author sprite comics could be better.

It is not a multi-author comic. However it will include cameos.

~Special chars~

Virtual Galaxy Hero degreenfreak (VGH DGF) [Level 1 form]:

Transformed into the body of the sprites of which he uses for his internet sprite comics and his internet ID, he is able to do amazing things that he and anybody else in the other universe have never been able to do before. He show’s great speed, strength, skill in doing powers and awareness, but lacks the common endurance (very similar to HP) that most of other Galaxy heroes obtain.

Power type: Electric

Strongest attack: insane “thunder slash” power overdrive (is able to cut through anything unless other reasons given. (Example: a device or a special strong shield) Rage needs to be maxed out. Charge level needs to be maxed out.)

Default flying option when solo or in a small team: Gravity lock

~Introduction V.1~

Scientists say that the universe holds everything in existence. This is true. Well, half of it anyway.

There are in fact, 2 universes.

The one your in now, which you might say is reality…

And the one that uses a lot of the same things of what you are using to view this text…

What am I talking about, you‘re probably asking yourself?

It’s the other universe. This is the universe where reality is virtual.

In this world… anything created into electronic data in our reality becomes their reality…

If you were ever stuck in this universe, you shouldn’t fear…

Why would you, a normal person, ever get stuck?

You are there for a reason…

So find your purpose and you’ll get sent back soon enough…

Because anything in this universe could happen…

Even getting erased…

~Mushroom kingdom Galaxy~

and a special different script for fighting to help the comic battles making sense

Spoiler:
Virtual Galaxies: Encyclopedia

(all dam/def ratings are out of 10)

Power types:


[Electric] (damage rating: 8 / defense rating: 4)
User Positives:
-Damage taken from strong electric attacks is divided by 2
-Small electric attacks don’t do any damage
-If hit with any electric based thing, it will slightly increase this powers charge up.

Attack positives:
-Most attacks using this power type can cut/go through most fire and wind attacks
-If an attack hits water and some liquids, it will electrify the entire substance

User negatives:
-if wet with water or some different liquid, getting hit with electric attacks do more damage
-you are unable to charge up without any extra things. A device is required to charge up normally

Attack negatives:
-strong attacks take a lot of your powers charge away
-if wet with water or some different liquid, using electric attacks do damage to yourself in the process

it is no where near ready to star making any comics now, but I AM going to make it, and I'm sure as hell I want to finish it.

I am not accepting cameo's right now though. I will later, but I want to get some things out of the way for the comic first.

and I haven't even mentioned everything I'm planing to do with this comic. you can expect it to be epic though. and I know I can do this. I just need time and thought.

EDIT: first Cameo considering list
Spoiler:
who I want in the comic:
Xavier/Xevious the Fox [why? because he's been on SJ since I have. we make awesome comics together. and his char could be perfect for this comic. because he's already got a choice of a power type]

who want to be in the comic:
Mav the ? [I think he'll be a human. not sure if he wants to be evil or not.]


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Re: Virtual Galaxies: a NEW sprite comic

Post  degreenfreak on Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:10 pm

(I'm not going to edit my posts because I'm going to be updating this alot and I want people to be able to catch up and back track. I will probably just edit my first post to make a link to the most up to date whatever)

for cameos, I might make a list for people to consider until I'm ready to accept, however.

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Post  Mavander on Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:36 pm

Meaning... I can propose a cameo and you'll put it away and consider about adding it later, right?
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Re: Virtual Galaxies: a NEW sprite comic

Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:10 am

correct. but the sprites must be around the same size as everyone elses. I'm sure you've seen my human sprites before. if not, Here is a list of all my sprites I've used to identify myself, including the updated ones I'm currently making for the comic. you can pretty much use any sprites around that size.

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Post  Mavander on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:06 am

That... that is, uh... simply too small. I only have my current KH: O sprites right now. Can't I use them? ...pwease?
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Re: Virtual Galaxies: a NEW sprite comic

Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:13 am

I forgot to say my char is meant to be a bit short.

you COULD but if their to tall, you might want to make some new sprites.

also I am in the middle of updating the script. if you want to see it stay tuned. I will post by the end of today.

EDIT: (damn I keep forgetting things) if you have anything to ask, request, wanting me to clarify or criticize, go ahead. I want this to be as perfect as it can be, and the only way I can do that is if you help me by just doing what I said.

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Post  Mavander on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:37 am

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9903/mav2qg3.png

These, or I'm out. You should know fully well by now, that recolor is the top of my spriting abilities... So doing a Sonic-size sprite will be like shooting me in the head.
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Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:48 am

I am REALLY sorry, but those are too big. my char only reach's to the top of your chars legs. you are welcome to post ANY sprites around the same size though. it doesn't have to be sonic, it could even be kirby or mario (even though you hate him from what I can remember) or whatever. ANYTHING around the same size I will accept, otherwise it'll get awkward. do you know what I mean?

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Post  Mavander on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:51 am

No.

No I don't.

Or perhaps I do.

But...

My character uses illusions, he might look like this to hide the fact that he got shorter in this dimension.

That wouldn't be of course his real size.

It'd never be shown.

...pwease?
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Re: Virtual Galaxies: a NEW sprite comic

Post  AnXjak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:55 am

Well Mav, I could make you some basic Sonic styled sprites, I've been practicing ya know... just tell me what sort of stuff you want (as in colour of clothing/fur or whatever) and i'll take care of it ._.
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Re: Virtual Galaxies: a NEW sprite comic

Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:57 am

you and other people are free to use this as a base but I would rather people to not recolour it.

or.... once I'm done with the script (for today), I could try to find sprites you might like to use. deal?


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Re: Virtual Galaxies: a NEW sprite comic

Post  Mavander on Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:58 am

Tell me, oh dear Anx, do I look like a person who wants to look like a FURRY?

No.

No I don't.

A deal it is.
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Re: Virtual Galaxies: a NEW sprite comic

Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 2:08 am

Script update:
Spoiler:
degreenfreak presents:

Virtual Galaxies
(aka, Heroes of the Virtual Universe/
Galaxy Heroes)

What is it?
It is a attempt to revolutionize sprite comics in general by trying to be original, including a strong story, real drawings (by me) and intense action like seen in blood cage and sonic rush explosion (both discontinued comics).

It is the real Vitral (I can’t believe I mis-spelled it and left it like that) Galaxies.

it is a attempt of making a sprite comic that interests even people who are sick of them.

It is a attempt to show an example on how multi-author sprite comics could be better.

It is not a multi-author comic. However it will include cameos.

~some short referneces~

(H.T.D refers to Human to Data)

~Special chars~

Human to Data Virtual Galaxy Hero degreenfreak (HTDVGH DGF/VGH DGF) [Level 1 form]:

Transformed into the body of the sprites of which he uses for his internet sprite comics and his internet ID, he is able to do amazing things that he and anybody else in the other universe have never been able to do before. He show’s great speed, strength, skill in doing powers and awareness, but lacks the common endurance (very similar to HP) that most of other Galaxy heroes obtain.

personality: he can be paiteint if needed to be but would rather to hasten things up if he possibley can. he can also be a bit clumsey and agressive at times, but he surely try's to plan things out the best he can do before he actually doe's it.

Power type: Electric

Strongest attack: insane “thunder slash” power overdrive (is able to cut through anything unless other reasons given. (Example: a device or a special strong shield) Rage needs to be maxed out. Charge level needs to be maxed out.)

Default flying option when solo or in a small team: Gravity lock

PLEASE NOTE THAT I AM NOT GOING TO DO YOUR OWN CHAR PROFILE

~Clans/Teams/Whatever the hell would also fit here~

Galaxy heroes (Human to Data conversion): they are here to help the Universe for the Greater good. some might just be doing this because they want to fill thier purpose and get the hell out of the universe. whatever the reason is, they will help the Universe. ether because the have too or they want too.

Galaxy heroes (born as alive Data in the V.Universe): they are also here to help the Universe for the Greater good. most of these heroes have obviously been saving people way before the Human to Data converted Heroes have. although most of them don't have all the powers that the Human to Data Heroes do. they can however assist them anyway they can.

Technomerids: the new evil people in the Virtual Galaxies. they find the universe thier playground to mess around with. they do as they please. even the Galaxy heroes that where already born and alive originaly in the Virtual universe (Mario, Sonic, Megaman, Ect.) have trouble facing these outlaws. as you probably could tell by the name, they mostly use machinery, hacks, virus's and other items gaget's and threat's to produce negitive effects to the universe. they have yet to find out the deadliest threat to the universe though. also saddly, some have of the supposed to be H.O.D "Heroes" have joined them because most of them also the universe as thier playground and nothing more, wether they relise they will never get out of the universe or not is thier problem.



~Introduction V.1~

Scientists say that the universe holds everything in existence. This is true. Well, half of it anyway.

There are in fact, 2 universes.

The one your in now, which you might say is reality…

And the one that uses a lot of the same things of what you are using to view this text…

What am I talking about, you‘re probably asking yourself?

It’s the other universe. This is the universe where reality is virtual.

In this world… anything created into electronic data in our reality becomes their reality…

If you were ever stuck in this universe, you shouldn’t fear…

Why would you, a normal person, ever get stuck?

You are there for a reason…

So find your purpose and you’ll get sent back soon enough…

Because anything in this universe could happen…

Even getting erased…

~Mushroom kingdom Galaxy~

I know what to do with mushroom kingdom Galaxy, I just haven't typed it out yet I'll probably do it tomorrow and holy crap I don't think I've every been so determined to do a comic.

btw thanks for offering help, AnXjak Very Happy

now to find some suitable sprites for Mav...

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Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 2:43 am

http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/luminousarc/index.html
http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/megamanzx/index.html
http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/megamanzxadvent/index.html
http://www.spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/tow3/sheet/14230
http://www.spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/mmzero/index.html
http://www.spriters-resource.com/gameboy_advance/mmzero3/index.html

I'm sick of searching now. they need to be sprites I can work with.

also, I know that this sounds a bit idiotic, but if you think about picking a char that is a female but you would like to change it to a male, I could try to change some details that make it look like a female to male (also get rid of any parts that could make you look a bit gay afterwards). pick any colours you want, If I need to change the colours slightly or increase the detail for the comic, I'll do so when I need to.


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Post  AnXjak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 2:45 am

@DGF:No problem-o


@Mav: Now that you mention it.. yeah.. doesn't seem like your thing XD
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Post  megagamefreak1 on Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:57 pm

Cont me in.

But first, I have to post my ending to KHO.

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Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:10 pm

I'm going to accept cameos now.

stupid me relised that I need to know what char's I'm using for the story.

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Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:23 pm

new cameo list (U2):
Spoiler:
who I want in the comic:
Xavier/Xevious the Fox [why? because he's been on SJ since I have. we make awesome comics together. and his char could be perfect for this comic. because he's already got a choice of a power type]

who want to be in the comic and am planning to put in:
Mav the ? [I think he'll be a human. not sure if he wants to be evil or not.]

Z-man the Humanoid robot [he's already got quite abit of story and detail for his char. I just need a little more info and then he's in.]

who want to be in the comic and I'm considering to be in:
MGF the ? [I am completely unsure about his char at all right now]

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Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:54 pm

Rules and conditions to being a Cameo (MUST READ IF YOU ARE PLANING TO BE ONE) (U1)
Spoiler:
(This list is not yet finished. please read it anyway to prepare yourself)

by being a cameo in the comic "Virtual Galaxies", you agree to:
1. letting degreenfreak to do whatever he wants to your char
2. have a decent amount of sprites of a decent enough size that will fit in with the comic and give full permission to let degreenfreak use them
3. actually give degreenfreak your sprites and not go "Lawl I want mi in plz" without giving any what so ever
4. you plan to give your char a description on his/her personality, story on how he/she got to where he/she is now with your request.
5. decide what power type you want your char to have.

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Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:25 pm

Encyclopedia: Update 2
Spoiler:
Virtual Galaxies: Encyclopedia

(all dam/def ratings are out of 10)

Power types:


[Electric] (damage rating: 8 / defense rating: 4)
User Positives:
-Damage taken from strong electric attacks is divided by 2
-Small electric attacks don’t do any damage
-If hit with any electric based thing, it will slightly increase this powers charge up.

Attack positives:
-Most attacks using this power type can cut/go through most fire and wind attacks
-If an attack hits water and some liquids, it will electrify the entire substance

User negatives:
-if wet with water or some different liquid, getting hit with electric attacks do more damage
-you are unable to charge up without any extra things. A device is required to charge up normally

Attack negatives:
-strong attacks take a lot of your powers charge away
-if wet with water or some different liquid, using electric attacks do damage to yourself in the process

~A SHORT LIST OF POWERS TO ADD TO THE LIST~
Fire
Water
Wind
Energy
Psychic
Magician

~A SHORT LIST OF POWER-MIXS TO ADD TO THE LIST. YOU CAN USE THESE WHEN YOU WANT AND ARE NOT FORCED TO HAVING TO USE THEM~
Wind + Water = Ice
Psychic/force + Magician = Artistic
Energy + Electric = Plasma
Wind + Magician = Force

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Post  degreenfreak on Thu Jan 22, 2009 11:47 pm

Uploaded a temp banner:


An example of what I mean to make it "one of the best looking sprite comics":

(left to right)
1. the original pose.
2. stupid me put it there twice for no reason.
3. edited the face. there is now a face made.
4. make a electric effect come from his hand.

now I could have left it like that. but if you know me better, you would know by now that I put as many effects that I can possibly can do without over doing it... SOOooo....

5. light effects added to char and transparency added to electric effect

you can study the differences with the enlarged parts I put there. I would REALLY like it if someone would Criticize or comment on the comic making so far please. Neutral

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Post  Mavander on Fri Jan 23, 2009 1:46 am

He looks like he's going "I will kick your butt and there's nothing you can do about it, so mah face will show no emotions and I will banter for no reason or purpose at all".

Emotions my dear... er... DGF, yeah, let's go with that.
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Post  Mavander on Fri Jan 23, 2009 2:08 am

Yep.

It's still the same good old godmodding Mav.

Except he locked himself in an armor to decrease his powers.

Why?

Because he was bored.

Those are actually blades made from water, so his power type or something is water. Ignore the bombs and other thing on the seet except for the character, tornado and charge.

I guess you could always go for "Mav the Leviathan".

He's on the side here he can fight more obviously. If the villains have a giant army, he'll be on the heroes side. If there's one villain and ten heroes, he'll join the villain.

His character changes as much as... something that changes... alot. He can help orphans excape from the fire, or blow the orphanage up. All depends on his mood.

So beware. Muahahahahahaha and all that villain stuff.
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Post  degreenfreak on Fri Jan 23, 2009 4:01 am

Mavander wrote:Yep.

It's still the same good old godmodding Mav.

Except he locked himself in an armor to decrease his powers.

Why?

Because he was bored.

Those are actually blades made from water, so his power type or something is water. Ignore the bombs and other thing on the seet except for the character, tornado and charge.

I guess you could always go for "Mav the Leviathan".

He's on the side here he can fight more obviously. If the villains have a giant army, he'll be on the heroes side. If there's one villain and ten heroes, he'll join the villain.

His character changes as much as... something that changes... alot. He can help orphans excape from the fire, or blow the orphanage up. All depends on his mood.

So beware. Muahahahahahaha and all that villain stuff.

it is actually impossible to god-mod to an absurd point in the Virtual Universe. not without ripping it anyway. and besides, LV1 H.T.D G.Heroes are extremely gifted anyway. LV2 is pretty much super, and LV3 is god-like (which will probably only be used once. ever)

I need to go into more detail about it. also I would prefer your char to be a hero. doe's he want to fill his purpose for justice or just to go back to the Reality universe?

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Post  degreenfreak on Fri Jan 23, 2009 5:33 am

yet another script update:
Spoiler:
degreenfreak presents:

Virtual Galaxies
(aka, Heroes of the Virtual Universe/
Galaxy Heroes)

What is it?
It is a attempt to revolutionize sprite comics in general by trying to be original, including a strong story, real drawings (by me) and intense action like seen in blood cage and sonic rush explosion (both discontinued comics).

It is the real Vitral (I can’t believe I mis-spelled it and left it like that) Galaxies.

it is a attempt of making a sprite comic that interests even people who are sick of them.

It is a attempt to show an example on how multi-author sprite comics could be better.

It is not a multi-author comic. However it will include cameos.

~some short referneces~

(H.T.D refers to Human to Data)

~Special chars~

Human to Data Virtual Galaxy Hero degreenfreak (HTDVGH DGF/VGH DGF) [Level 1 form]:

Transformed into the body of the sprites of which he uses for his internet sprite comics and his internet ID, he is able to do amazing things that he and anybody else in the other universe have never been able to do before. He show’s great speed, strength, skill in doing powers and awareness, but lacks the common endurance (very similar to HP) that most of other Galaxy heroes obtain.

personality: he can be paiteint if needed to be but would rather to hasten things up if he possibley can. he can also be a bit clumsey and agressive at times, but he surely try's to plan things out the best he can do before he actually doe's it.

Power type: Electric

Strongest attack: insane “thunder slash” power overdrive (is able to cut through anything unless other reasons given. (Example: a device or a special strong shield) Rage needs to be maxed out. Charge level needs to be maxed out.)

Default flying option when solo or in a small team: Gravity lock


Galaxy Hero Hybrid DGF degreenfreak [Level 1 form]:

he might rarely transform into his half cat half fox self. he can basicly do everything he could do as a LV.1 GH before in this form.

Power type: Electric

Strongest attack: “thunder slash” power overdrive (is able to cut through anything unless other reasons given. (Example: a device or a special strong shield) Rage needs to be maxed out. Charge level needs to be maxed out.)

Default flying option when solo or in a small team: Gravity lock


Galaxy Hero Mavander [level 1 form]:

Mavander entered the Universe confused about what was in front of him. he soon learned that he had powers like most H.T.D heroes and Techmerits, but he still has much to learn about this universe. Mav entered the universe only a day before DGF did. Mav wears armor because "he just can", and there for, he is not a robot, but a human. his blades are in actual fact water.

Personality: Mav would rather fight with whichever side he could fight more enemys with. mav might also do whatever he please's, which might classify him a neutral more then a hero.

Power type: Water

Strongest attack: "Water cannon" power overdrive (like DGFs “thunder slash” power overdrive, it is also able to cut through anything. however when fighting an enemy, it will instead push the enemy powerfuly far, making it perfect to buy sometime if needed. it can do major damage if the enemy hits into some things along it's trip. Rage needs to be maxed out. Charge level needs to be maxed out)

Default flying option when solo or in a small team: Gravity lock


Dr. Matthew Stearif [Support]

Dr. Stearif is prehaps the best support you can get for a Galaxy Hero. he's the one that will be helping the Galaxy Hero's from the very start to the very finish with gadgets, infomation and such.

personality: Seemingly always determined to help save the universe and the G.Heroes, He regardlessly can get very impatitant and dosen't like being distrubed for not a good enough reason. he always seems to be working on something...

Dr. Miyu Alexandra

she likes to read. alot. her... ahem.... "skill" can infact help alot. she can seem to research things almost instantly if she's in Dr. Stearifs Libary. any questions about things Dr. Stearif dosen't know should go directly to her. she would rather you just to call her Miyu.

personality: even though she's only 16, her intellegentance is still increadibley high. she wishes she could be a Galaxy hero. she can be imature at times (therefor bugging Dr.Stearif time to time), but mainly because shes just having fun. at all flirt with her and she will probably blast at you.

PLEASE NOTE THAT I AM NOT GOING TO DO YOUR OWN CHAR PROFILE UNLESS I HAVE ENOUGH INFO PROVIDED

~Clans/Teams/Whatever the hell would also fit here~

Galaxy heroes (Human to Data conversion): they are here to help the Universe for the Greater good. some might just be doing this because they want to fill thier purpose and get the hell out of the universe. whatever the reason is, they will help the Universe. ether because the have too or they want too.

Galaxy heroes (born as alive Data in the V.Universe): they are also here to help the Universe for the Greater good. most of these heroes have obviously been saving people way before the Human to Data converted Heroes have. although most of them don't have all the powers that the Human to Data Heroes do. they can however assist them anyway they can.

Technomerits: the new evil people in the Virtual Galaxies. they find the universe thier playground to mess around with. they do as they please. even the Galaxy heroes that where already born and alive originaly in the Virtual universe (Mario, Sonic, Megaman, Ect.) have trouble facing these outlaws. as you probably could tell by the name, they mostly use machinery, hacks, virus's and other items gaget's and threat's to produce negitive effects to the universe. they have yet to find out the deadliest threat to the universe though. also saddly, some have of the supposed to be H.T.D "Heroes" have joined them because most of them also find the universe as thier playground and nothing more, wether they relise they will never get out of the universe or not is thier problem.

Team Nova: the name was suggested by Miyu. Team Nova have most of the proper Galaxy Heroes in it. Team Nova use the "Nova Ship" to fly planet to planet even though they can use Gravity lock for that. What's the point then? think of it as a portable house.

~Introduction V.1~

Scientists say that the universe holds everything in existence. This is true. Well, half of it anyway.

There are in fact, 2 universes.

The one your in now, which you might say is reality…

And the one that uses a lot of the same things of what you are using to view this text…

What am I talking about, you‘re probably asking yourself?

It’s the other universe. This is the universe where reality is virtual.

In this world… anything created into electronic data in our reality becomes their reality…

If you were ever stuck in this universe, you shouldn’t fear…

Why would you, a normal person, ever get stuck?

You are there for a reason…

So find your purpose and you’ll get sent back soon enough…

Because anything in this universe could happen…

Even getting erased…

~Mushroom kingdom Galaxy~

Still getting around to that Mushroom Kingdom Galaxy...

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